I need your input please.

by **Jeffro** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 12:17 am

I deleted my old account on http://www.purevolume.com and created a new one to change my band name. And I was wondering how my cover art is. I am yet to be approved, but once/if I am, I will share you my music (self promotion, tooting my own horn, whatever you may call it).

The band name is vagabond, and so far I have only created one song under this title.

by Conscious* » Mon Jul 19, 2004 12:22 am

What kind of music..ive never been a fan of japanese anime.

by **Jeffro** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 12:27 am

Originally posted by Crypt
What kind of music..ive never been a fan of japanese anime.

Neither am I, but I thought this picture was pretty cool.

Not sure if you will like the music or not.

Right now I'm experimenting with different styles/techniques, so you may hear a hybrid of stuff. The only part I do not like about my songs is my voice. It is too high pitched (not fury high pitched, but I want it significantly lower).

In the first song I submitted, it starts out with a old school rock feel, and then it goes into a techno/trance/hymn feel...

Yah...it's a little hard to describe.
:freak:

by **Jeffro** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 12:37 am

http://www.geocities.com/jeffbrak/RebelHymn.mp3
RIGHT CLICK AND SAVE AS to download

Here is the song I submitted...

Mind you all I use is a keyboard, a computer, and my voice.

The quality is 64 kbps, 22 khz.

by **Hairy Ballsagna** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 12:55 am

She looks really young, naked + young + bloody, kinda creepy.

by **:UnclSxyPants:** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 2:16 am

yah im gona second the whole creepy thing

by **inmate#655321** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 6:31 am

Not a bad tune, Jeffro. Your voice isn't to high.. not like some of the new annoying bands like the Darkness, etc..

Suggestion, if I may? The break toward the end where you echo and delay the vocals and smooth out to the end. Cut it.
Your song has energy that is totaly lost in the end. You can bring it down a little in the middle.. short break. A few seconds maybe but the energy should stay throughout the song. Another thing.. It sound like you're using the keyboard for bass. Not bad but it doesn't strengthen the song, it weakens it. They should be seperate and distinct.

Sorry if you don't care for my opinions. Just a musician's perspective. Pretty kewl on the whole. Post more when you have them.

by **Jeffro** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 9:05 am

Originally posted by inmate#655321
Not a bad tune, Jeffro. Your voice isn't to high.. not like some of the new annoying bands like the Darkness, etc..

Suggestion, if I may? The break toward the end where you echo and delay the vocals and smooth out to the end. Cut it.
Your song has energy that is totaly lost in the end. You can bring it down a little in the middle.. short break. A few seconds maybe but the energy should stay throughout the song. Another thing.. It sound like you're using the keyboard for bass. Not bad but it doesn't strengthen the song, it weakens it. They should be seperate and distinct.

Sorry if you don't care for my opinions. Just a musician's perspective. Pretty kewl on the whole. Post more when you have them.

Yeah...I know the energy was lost. I had two seperate idea's running through my head. I'll cut it and make the echo part a totally different song.

About the bass:

Are you saying use a real bass or make the rhythem seperate or what?

http://www.geocities.com/jeffbrak/Cover.zip
(Piano cover of great gig in the sky)

by **Murgatroyd** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 9:27 am

Input... Iiiiinput!!!

by **Buliwyf** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 10:02 am

Originally posted by Jeffro
http://www.geocities.com/jeffbrak/RebelHymn.mp3
RIGHT CLICK AND SAVE AS to download

Here is the song I submitted...

Mind you all I use is a keyboard, a computer, and my voice.

The quality is 64 kbps, 22 khz.

not letting me download. right click save as, it says cannot find file

by **deathBOB** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 10:09 am

im getting an "over your bandwidth limit" error

by **Jeffro** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 10:42 am

Try now...geoshitties has a bandwidth limit and resets itself every hour. It should work now...I just tried it.

by **Colonel Ingus** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 11:08 am

No Disassemble!

by **smithpa68** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 11:09 am

Don't like the creepy young bloody anime girl... but your sig is awesome. How about using that? or some derivative.

by **Sewer-Urchin** » Mon Jul 19, 2004 11:41 am

Johnny 5 alive!!

I need your input please.

I need your input please.

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