Mon Jun 14, 2004 9:09 pm
Honestly, i didnt intend to modify it, i just forgot the order... I memorized the poem for a project in 5th grade... and I thought of the lines from memory...
Mon Jun 14, 2004 9:39 pm
I like it Bob...great job!
Mon Jun 14, 2004 9:52 pm
Do you have the original art (before you wrote on it)? Is it larger than this?
Mon Jun 14, 2004 10:10 pm
I agree with Chacal anout the modifying the poem. It would sound much better if it was like the original:
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
-Slayer
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
-Slayer
Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:15 am
I think you should use a plane because planes>tanks 
Tue Jun 15, 2004 12:41 pm
Originally posted by Slayer
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
I agree it has a natural rythym that way which makes it much better.
Tue Jun 15, 2004 6:44 pm
Heres the original: Its actually a render from FH of the King Tiger.
Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:35 pm
I took the liberty of making the sig. If you like it, it is yours. If not, it didn't take too long.
http://akofod.com/blog/akofod_tank.gif
http://akofod.com/blog/akofod_tank.gif
